人與人之間的關(guān)系，其實一直是雅思寫作考試中比較常見的考試范圍。通常家人之間的關(guān)系、同學(xué)同事之間的關(guān)系還算比較常出現(xiàn)；更有甚者可能會考察年輕人與老年人之間的關(guān)系。

 

　　這次考察了鄰里之間的關(guān)系，也算是有些小眾的話題。但是，該題目的提問方式較為簡單，是一個標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的雙問題報告。北京環(huán)球教育（原環(huán)球雅思）楊亮老師認為這種文章在行文過程中，基本可以不用考慮結(jié)構(gòu)的問題，最穩(wěn)妥的四段法也肯定是 選擇。

 

　　題目如下：

 

　　City dwellers seldom socialize with their neighbors today and the sense of community has lost.Why this happens?And how to solve this?20160924

 

　　兩個問題，因此毫不猶豫地選擇四段法。分別用一個主段來回應(yīng)一個問題。由于篇幅限制，通常情況下每個問題的回應(yīng)會被分為兩個分論點進行討論。這樣對論證來說比較規(guī)范，盡管如此下文并沒有采用這一傳統(tǒng)方式。

 

　　Neighbors have not been on the list of persons who people can call to have a chat or party together for a long time,since people began to move to relatively isolated apartment buildings to live in.With majority of people realizing the significance of contact with others living around,it is the high time to step out of their apartments to enjoy the time with their neighbors.

 

　　開頭段，實則全是背景的描述。因為本題是報告類的問題，對于點題要求不高。并不比像以往題目當(dāng)中一定要將本題爭論的要點轉(zhuǎn)述出來。

 

　　All reasons that might lead to this situation can be attributed to people's modern lifestyle with excessive stress and hurry.In the morning,most people will rush to where they work or study,and thus they have no time to chat with who come out of the same building with them.Usually,a smile or a nod to others is what people can only do for greeting.Similarly,after a whole day's tiring work,in the evening few people can still be energetic to talk to whoever they meet in their community.The only thing they are willing to do is rushing home.Weekends are so precious for them that majority of them will choose to stay at home to spend time with their family.

 

　　其實，本段只是論證了一個導(dǎo)致這一尷尬事實的原因。隨后，通過時間層次來分別論證了這一論點。這并不是一個傳統(tǒng)的報告類文章的論證方式。各位可以借鑒。

 

　　Dragging urban residents out of their flats requires a series of methods.In the urban planning stage,residential buildings should not be designed that crowdedly in order to leave adequate open space for public activity areas like places for fitness facilities and gardens.Thereafter,under supervision of local governments,real estate developers ought to be responsible for installing those facilities and building gardens for local residents.After people moving in these buildings,local committees should be in charge of organizing community activities at weekends or on public holidays regularly,inviting who live around to offer them a chance to get relaxation from participating in some group recreational activities with their neighbors in the areas designed by governments and built by developers.

 

　　本段亦是如此，其實就是一個解決方案。只不過從不同階段開始論證而已。和傳統(tǒng)的兩個方案的并列結(jié)構(gòu)有所不同。

 

　　Most of people have already realized the importance of getting along well with their neighbors,and however why they still do not know each other is just because they are more likely to spend their limited free time so as to loosen up by themselves.Once opportunities for both getting relaxation and knowing their neighbors are available,without a shadow of doubt people will be fond of them.

 

　　結(jié)尾總結(jié)了全文的兩個主段，中規(guī)中矩。

 

　　縱觀全文，盡管結(jié)構(gòu)是非常常規(guī)的四段法，每一個主段回應(yīng)一個問題，具體的論證方法可能有別于通常情況下各位讀過的例文。但是，此行文邏輯還是值得推敲的。文章本無好壞，結(jié)構(gòu)亦是如此。

 

　　環(huán)球教育（原環(huán)球雅思）老師通過這樣的方式來論證本篇報告類文章，也只是想給各位讀者一個不常規(guī)的方式。歡迎借鑒，歡迎斧正。